learning goal: how can I make my PDF clearer than it already is? What sentence issues have been recurring in my writing so far?
Cavafy; idyll, metaphor, repetition
time to revise, complete and submit PDF#2 to TURNITIN (if you have submitted already, and want to revise based on classmates’ feedback, I can delete the file you have submitted; be sure to acknowledge, in the footer, anyone who has helped you)
by the time we return from holiday, please have finished reading to the end of Antigone (line 1518)
By Unknown – http://arjelle.altervista.org/Tesine/Sara/teocrito.htm, Public Domain, https://commons.wikimedia.org/w/index.php?curid=21727090
“Idyll VII” by Theocritus