learning goal: what approaches work best for final proofreading of a formal letter? why these?
feedback for Mr. Brown’s letter
feedback from Mr. Brown on your draft #3: collective and individual
collective: remove header/footer, quotations (citing, giving context, etc.), headings, addressing envelopes
individual: see TRNTN
revise, print, and hand to classmate for hard-copy proofreading
if necessary, print new clean copy
if planning to send, fold letter into addressed envelope–leaving envelope unsealed