In Friday’s class, you received feedback from classmates, before submitting your writing to TURNITIN.

I will glance at these writings, but want to give you another chance this weekend to revise further.  I find it fun and valuable to work with a piece of writing over time.

So take the time, make the time, to read your piece again.  Look for ways to polish, refine, re-arrange and re-consider.  Find just the right way to phrase an idea.  Enjoy this opportunity.

In Monday’s class, you will submit this newer version–also to TURNITIN–and this one I will read more closely in order to give you my feedback.